Thursday, May 1, 2014

Synchronized Hearts: Edit to "Better than a Hallmark Card"

I wrote the original back in August 2013 and I found another poetry contest that asked for something that you'd put on a card for some sort of monumental life moment (ex birthday, anniversary, whatever) and just decided to revise that one heavily to see where it gets me. Here it is:


An anniversary is a beautiful milestone…
It signifies the proud relationship that’s been developed over time,
Powerful feelings that are embodied through synchronized hearts,
And the permanent love that’s unites a couple as one through the ties of genuine bonds.

Togetherness will forever exist even after the travels to eternal life!
Through absolute turmoil or trivial fog that tries to cause a high tide,
The battle will continue through every state from misery to triumph!

No matter what,
Your beauty radiates to the world with a persistent smile and a childish glow!
Our flame will forever sparkle in the fields of love
As we continue to harvest the seeds of passion for the future!

The adventure is ours!
Let’s go make a precious monument out of it!

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